Final Script for Film idea

In the first script we did not include what  location  we would be shooting in and what time we would be shooting. We also did not include the props we had in the shot, we learnt by not having this we was not clear on what we needed for the screen, this then made us waste time as we was not organised. We included the stage derections as we do not have a lot of dialouge in out opening sequence. So in our final draft we included everrything that we failed to include in our first draft, and this is how it now looks:
 
Nicholas : I already told its over and I ain’t having no baby

Jonathan : How could he do this to my little girl (Shout angrily)

Jonathan walks through door , into the room. He then walks across the room and aggressively steps on a photo of Nicholas.


INT.  MEDIA STUDIO - MORNING

Sarah (v.o): Nicholas I need to tell you something (pause) I’m pregnant.

Nicholas (v.o): I already told its over and I ain’t having no baby

Jonathan (v.o): How could he do this to my little girl (Shout angrily)

INT.  MEDIA STUDIO - MORNING

Location: Media Studio

Props : Photo of Nicholas

Jonathan walks through door , into the room. He then walks across the room and aggressively steps on a photo of Nicholas.

INT.  MEDIA STUDIO - AFTERNOON

Location: Media Studio

Props:  Rope and Masking Tape

Jonathan walks over to Nicholas who is tied up and unconscious and stands towering over Nicholas’s body.

INT.  MEDIA STUDIO – MORNING/AFTERNOON

Location: Media Studio

Props:  Rope and Masking Tape

Nicholas abruptly opens his eyes directly into the camera